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Sneak Peek Critiques© [#3] Witch’s Brew By Ryan Scott (VIDEO)

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Sneak Peek Critiques© [#3]

Witch’s Brew By Ryan Scott

 

Sneak Peek Critiques© are all about the first 8 lines of any story.

An experienced editor will tell you they can almost always determine whether or not a manuscript is worth continuing reading very quickly.

Many times within the first 8 sentences and sometimes much sooner… [first sentence.. yikes!].

In fact, the very first sentence of any book or chapter is essential to getting the reader hooked.

A writer can never slack off. Every sentence and every word counts.

Editors know this. That’s why if your story doesn’t grab them within the first 8 lines you’re manuscript is most likely doomed (and dragged) to the trash icon.

That’s why the Sneak Peek Critiques© series is all about the first 8 lines of any story.

Today we’re looking at Witch’s Brew by Ryan Scott. It’s available on www.smashwords.com.

The Sneak Peek Critique© #3 video is below…

Thank you for reading and I wish you many imaginative tales.

R.M. Robbins – info@thewritersnexus.com

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