Sneak Peek Critiques© [#3]
Witch’s Brew By Ryan Scott
Sneak Peek Critiques© are all about the first 8 lines of any story.
An experienced editor will tell you they can almost always determine whether or not a manuscript is worth continuing reading very quickly.
Many times within the first 8 sentences and sometimes much sooner… [first sentence.. yikes!].
In fact, the very first sentence of any book or chapter is essential to getting the reader hooked.
A writer can never slack off. Every sentence and every word counts.
Editors know this. That’s why if your story doesn’t grab them within the first 8 lines you’re manuscript is most likely doomed (and dragged) to the trash icon.
That’s why the Sneak Peek Critiques© series is all about the first 8 lines of any story.
Today we’re looking at Witch’s Brew by Ryan Scott. It’s available on www.smashwords.com.
The Sneak Peek Critique© #3 video is below…
Thank you for reading and I wish you many imaginative tales.