‘A Long Journey’ – Childrens Book Editing Example

I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this childrens book edit. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… A working title is always a good idea to include with the manuscript….

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‘ELLIE AND BEN’ – A Rhyme and Meter Editing Example

  *** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…

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