‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Editing Example

I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in
I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in
*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments
Secrets Behind the Stone Wall The Queen dazzled with red jewels at her throat High atop the ancient castle standing tall