I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in
BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT.
EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.
My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…
*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments