Renee The Writer At The Nexus

make changes for clarity, writing for clarity, children's book editing

January 7, 2023

‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity

This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for CLARITY. <–…

6 questions, story, writing tips for authors

November 25, 2022

If You Can’t Answer These 6 Questions Stop Writing! You Don’t Have A Story And This Is Why…

If You Can’t Answer These 6 Questions You Don’t Have A Story If you struggle, like I do sometimes, with whether or not…

mini me, childrens book editing, developmental editing

September 12, 2022

“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book

Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a first time…

emily dickinson, american poet, writing help, book review

September 11, 2022

An American Poet – A Deeper Look At Emily Dickinson

An American Poet – Emily Dickinson There’s something about Emily Dickinson’s story as a woman and a writer that really hits deeply when…

star interview technique. interview response technique, star response,

August 28, 2022

STAR Interview Response Method – The STAR Technique Is For More Than Jobseekers!

What Is The STAR Interview Response Technique & How Do You Use It? Some job boards have described the STAR technique as a strategic…

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August 25, 2022

A Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help – Editing Critique

Here is a Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help Hi, as part of my editorial review I will offer grammatical,…

August 25, 2022

‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that…

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July 17, 2022

Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} Is A TOP Performing Technique In The Cognitive Behavioral Therapy {CBT} Category

Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} in essence is a way of ‘witnessing’ your own thought process and a top performing technique in the array of…

moms a ninja, developmental editing, freelance copywritier

June 30, 2022

‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as…

Metered rhyming verse for kids, editing example, developmental editing, freelance writer, white paper writer

June 27, 2022

Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids

Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a…

June 22, 2022

Sharpening Your Writers POV – Know the Difference Between Intention & Perspective

Writing is all about perspective. It’s you and the words and that’s it. Unlike meeting someone in person or even speaking on…

editing critique, short childrens story, storytelling, writer better

June 20, 2022

‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example

This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding…

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June 16, 2022

‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example

This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers…

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June 16, 2022

The 4 Horsemen of The Writers Apocalypse – The 4 Perspectives Every Writer Must Master

I like intensity in writing. I’m no religious scholar, but I’d say the Bible is intense. With that said, I’m likening what I…

Childrens Book, a long journey, book edit, beta reader

October 25, 2021

‘A Long Journey’ – Childrens Book Editing Example

I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this childrens book…

chicken little, original 1943 disney version

May 10, 2020

‘Chicken Little’ – A Children’s Story Or 1943 War Propaganda? (Original Film Version)

You will be absolutely amazed at the not-so-subtle message in this original Disney children’s cartoon of ‘Chicken Little’. It even includes a scene with…

Where Characters & Copy Collide….

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