Renee The Writer At The Nexus

‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take

Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} in essence is a way of ‘witnessing’ your own thought process and a top performing technique in the

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my

Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions

Writing is all about perspective. It’s you and the words and that’s it. Unlike meeting someone in person or even

This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a

This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many

I like intensity in writing. I’m no religious scholar, but I’d say the Bible is intense. With that said, I’m likening

BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT.

EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.

My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…

OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader

In this article we briefly answer the question; What is a Medical Intuitive? Brief Definition A Medical Intuitive is a

*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments

What Is Spiritualism? In a nutshell – Spiritualism Is A Spiritual Belief System With 3 Branches; Religion, Philosophy And Science. It’s

I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this

In June of 2018 I had the opportunity to interview a genuine caulbearer. (See definition at the bottom of this blog)

In this article you’ll read the traditional idea of what reiki is from a transcript I took from