‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take
Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take
Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} in essence is a way of ‘witnessing’ your own thought process and a top performing technique in the
Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my
Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions
Writing is all about perspective. It’s you and the words and that’s it. Unlike meeting someone in person or even
This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a
This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many
I like intensity in writing. I’m no religious scholar, but I’d say the Bible is intense. With that said, I’m likening
BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT.
EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.
My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…
OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader
In this article we briefly answer the question; What is a Medical Intuitive? Brief Definition A Medical Intuitive is a
*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments
What Is Spiritualism? In a nutshell – Spiritualism Is A Spiritual Belief System With 3 Branches; Religion, Philosophy And Science. It’s
I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this
In June of 2018 I had the opportunity to interview a genuine caulbearer. (See definition at the bottom of this blog)
In this article you’ll read the traditional idea of what reiki is from a transcript I took from