‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that my corrections and comments will always be in dark pink. Additionally, please view this editing example along side the original as there be many deletions which obviously can’t show up in…

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Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} Is A TOP Performing Technique In The Cognitive Behavioral Therapy {CBT} Category

Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} in essence is a way of ‘witnessing’ your own thought process and a top performing technique in the array of such in Cognitive Behavioral Coaching and Therapy. It’s based in the belief that thinking patterns impact your emotions and behavior. So, if you learn to catch negative thoughts early you can…

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‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words are in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. My Mom’s a Ninja by Thalia…

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