The Importance of Editing And Revising Your Book Manuscript

Finally! You’ve finished your book. Next is getting the cover and starting to sell it right? Wrong! In this post I want to impress upon you the critical need of editing and revising your book manuscript before you reading audience sees it. And unless you’re a very experienced writer, you are going to need an…

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‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Editing Example

 I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches a lesson that: adventure in action,…

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“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book

Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a first time reader would and make note of anything that may or may not be an issue for the reader. I will make positive comments on things that work well and comments on…

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‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that my corrections and comments will always be in dark pink. Additionally, please view this editing example along side the original as there be many deletions which obviously can’t show up in…

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‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words are in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. My Mom’s a Ninja by Thalia…

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