‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words are in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. My Mom’s a Ninja by Thalia…

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Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids

Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s take a look at…

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‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example

This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers in this capacity. Writing for kids is not nearly as easy as many adults might think. There have been no changes except a name here or there to protect the writers…

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