‘Honey Bee Rescue’ – Editing Example of a Children’s Story

OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that and always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Honey Bee Rescue   Ashley, Maria, Marcus, Jose, and Alexander…

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‘A Long Journey’ – Childrens Book Editing Example

I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this childrens book edit. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… A working title is always a good idea to include with the manuscript….

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‘ELLIE AND BEN’ – A Rhyme and Meter Editing Example

  *** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…

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