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Category: Editing

Real Life editing examples, developmental editing, coach for writers

These are Real client editing examples from Renee – The Writer (and Editor) at The Nexus.

I’ve gone through and eliminated any identifying information to protect the authors. Other than that, these edits are as is.

My developmental editing notes are in pink. I don’t proofread.

‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Editing Example

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‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity

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“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book

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A Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help – Editing Critique

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‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

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‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

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Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids

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‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example

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‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example

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Mr. Snuffles – Children’s Book Developmental Editing Example

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‘Honey Bee Rescue’ – Editing Example of a Children’s Story

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‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Children’s Story Developmental Editing Example

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‘A Long Journey’ – Childrens Book Editing Example

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Editing Service Example – ‘Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World’

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‘ELLIE AND BEN’ – A Rhyme and Meter Editing Example

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‘Glory Fine’ – Kid’s Book Editing Example

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The {Real} 7 Deadly Sins…

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A Sneak Peek Critique©

Interview With A New Novelist

Find Your Focus…

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Exposing Creative Productivity…

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