January 7, 2023 ‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for CLARITY. <–…
November 25, 2022 If You Can’t Answer These 6 Questions Stop Writing! You Don’t Have A Story And This Is Why… If You Can’t Answer These 6 Questions You Don’t Have A Story If you struggle, like I do sometimes, with whether or not…
September 12, 2022 “Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a first time…
September 11, 2022 An American Poet – A Deeper Look At Emily Dickinson An American Poet – Emily Dickinson There’s something about Emily Dickinson’s story as a woman and a writer that really hits deeply when…
August 28, 2022 STAR Interview Response Method – The STAR Technique Is For More Than Jobseekers! What Is The STAR Interview Response Technique & How Do You Use It? Some job boards have described the STAR technique as a strategic…
August 25, 2022 A Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help – Editing Critique Here is a Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help Hi, as part of my editorial review I will offer grammatical,…
August 25, 2022 ‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that…
July 17, 2022 Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} Is A TOP Performing Technique In The Cognitive Behavioral Therapy {CBT} Category Cognitive Processing Therapy {CPT} in essence is a way of ‘witnessing’ your own thought process and a top performing technique in the array of…
June 30, 2022 ‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as…
June 27, 2022 Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a…
June 22, 2022 Sharpening Your Writers POV – Know the Difference Between Intention & Perspective Writing is all about perspective. It’s you and the words and that’s it. Unlike meeting someone in person or even speaking on…
June 20, 2022 ‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding…
June 16, 2022 ‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers…
June 16, 2022 The 4 Horsemen of The Writers Apocalypse – The 4 Perspectives Every Writer Must Master I like intensity in writing. I’m no religious scholar, but I’d say the Bible is intense. With that said, I’m likening what I…
October 25, 2021 ‘A Long Journey’ – Childrens Book Editing Example I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification in this childrens book…
May 10, 2020 ‘Chicken Little’ – A Children’s Story Or 1943 War Propaganda? (Original Film Version) You will be absolutely amazed at the not-so-subtle message in this original Disney children’s cartoon of ‘Chicken Little’. It even includes a scene with…
