BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT.
EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.
My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…
*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches…
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I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches a lesson that: adventure in action,…
Bedtime For Dreamer Willie by Allison Myers This is a funny children’s book about a boy who loves to dream, and doesn’t like evening routine. This book falls under the categories of Picture Books, Preschool Books, Books Ages 3-6, Baby Books, Kids Book, Bedtime. My rating: 5 of 5 stars for Bedtime For Dreamer Willie I’ve…
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