“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book

Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a first time reader would and make note of anything that may or may not be an issue for the reader. I will make positive comments on things that work well and comments on…

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‘My Mom’s a Ninja’ – Developmental Editing Example

Hi Thalia; Thank you for working with me once again. Here is the manuscript critique. As always… I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words are in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. My Mom’s a Ninja by Thalia…

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