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Sharpening Your Writers POV – Know the Difference Between Intention & Perspective


Writing is all about perspective.


It’s you and the words and that’s it.

Unlike meeting someone in person or even speaking on the phone, where we engage most of our senses in the communication, it’s just the reader and your words.


That’s why the words you use and how you string them together make all the difference in your writing.

To make those strings of words as effective as possible, you must have a clear perspective.


Perspective is Different than Intention


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Intention is important when you want to persuade.


Perspective is about your philosophy as a writer.


Do you know what your philosophy is?


If not ask yourself some of these questions;


  • What’s really important to you to get across as a writer?
  • What’s important to you as a creative person?
  • What’s important to you as a member of the human race on this planet?
  • What parts of your culture or society interests you in an intense way?
  • What do you value in terms of a person’s character?


These are the types of questions to have the answers to when talking about your writer’s perspective.

Now, let’s break it down.


There are specific elements to your perspective we want to focus on and rein in to communicate the most effectively through your writing.

These elements are:

1. ENERGY = Desires/Emotions/Spirit

2. CONNECTIONS = Commonalities/Relationships

3. PHYSICALITY = Bodies/Environment





The very stuff of our existence. Life is energy.

Desires are all about the Life force. To want is to be human.


So, whenever you get stuck, ask yourself what do you want your reader to get from this story? This scene? This chapter?


Translate these questions into what your characters want. What are their desires in the overall scheme of their lives?

You can give your characters any type of desires you want. The stronger the better. This will offer the deepest possible well of creation to draw from.

Strong emotion is a sign of connection, attachment and desire.


In addition, understanding your own desires and emotions will help you tap into those of your characters. The energy of your characters’ desires is the catalyst for truthful action.

There must be a “why” behind the emotion.


As in life, the strength of desire inspires a person to take some type of action. The why behind the emotion will get your characters moving.

Frankly, it’s not much of a journey if your characters don’t go somewhere and do something of consequence.


This is especially true in our modern world.

In the new millennium storytelling is almost all about action.


Important Tip:

Don’t underestimate how much energy the creative process uses.

Manage your own energy well. Remember to breath. Still your mind before writing.

The farther you reach into your imagination to find a fresh idea, the more energy its going to take. Be prepared for this.


#2 CONNECTIONS = Commonalities/Relationships

Connections, are the things we have in common. Whether a connection is as tenuous as a name that sounds familiar or so solid everyone in the neighborhood knows who you are, connections elevate any story.


For example; I’m lost. I enter a gas station to ask for directions. I ask the guy behind the counter where the town’s main library is. He says down the road and take a left.


Now, what would make this innocuous encounter more interesting are connections.

It continues…


The gas station guy says, “Oh so, you must be a big reader?”

I say, “Well yeah, I like to read and I write too. I’m doing research for my book.” The gas station guy says, “Really? What kinda book are you writing?”
“It’s a novel about two sisters who inherit their mother’s haunted house.” “Spooky.”

“Yeah. And it seems this town has some haunted buildings. Supposedly there are few books in the town library about it,” I explained.

“Oh, well, you must be talking about Shellings Manor, the old mental institution at the north end of town. Yeah, that place’ll raise the hairs on the back of y’er neck. Got lost in there one night on a dare and damn near lost my mind,” the young, sandy-haired man looked down and shook his head suddenly looking a lot older.

So I asked, “Really? Would you be willing to talk about it? I’d love to hear your story. I could do my best Katie Couric.”


Do you see what’s happened here?

An ordinary encounter has revealed many connections. Physical connections, human connections, emotional connections and they’ve been revealed through dialogue, character thoughts and some action.

Just keep looking for the connections between the characters, their desires and their environment and you’ll keep the storyline moving.


#3 PHYSICALITY = Bodies/Environment

Having a clear description in your mind of your character is very important.

It will help you develop their personalities and their actions.

Once you have the details of your character’s appearance developed, delve into your imagination and think what it might be like to experience the world through their body.

If you need help, ask someone who is physically similar as your character.

Having a clear picture in your mind of the physicality of your characters and their surrounding geographical elements will help you write vivid, detailed characters and environments.

Doing research is a large part of any fiction or non-fiction writer’s work.



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Keep these 3 things in mind when you write and will sharpen your writer’s POV and increase the effectiveness of your storytelling;


1. ENERGY = Desires/Emotions/Spirit —> Know the depths of your characters and yourself!


2. CONNECTIONS = Commonalities/Relationships — How do your characters know each other?


3. PHYSICALITY = Bodies/Environment – Be clear on what your characters and their surroundings look like

Now go out there and write like you want to change and influence some minds!



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‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example

This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story.

As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding of how to tell a story.

I eventually stopped working with new writers. Most public schools teach people how to read and write well. They don’t tell students how to tell a good story.

Some of us are natural storytellers. Most of us are not.

I personally like to work with people who are already quite proficient in their storytelling.

That way I can help them develop their style. Not tell them how to write a story.

You’ll see what I mean with the edit below…

Afternoons With Seeya

Thank you for ordering my manuscript critique. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…

Anika is four years old.
Every day after Kindergarten, she visits her mother’s parents for the afternoon.
She calls her grandmother, Achi, and her grandfather, Seeya.
These are many things Anika likes doing at Achi and Seeya’s house.
Cooking dinner with Achi. Achi cooks mainly with rice. Anika cooks mainly with sand. Watching Tom and Jerry cartoons with Seeya. Anika and Seeya laugh and laugh.

OK… so far it’s a little like a laundry list of things they’re doing. We need descriptions. What do they look like? Where are they? What does the environment look like? We need action. We need to see some introduction to a plot or theme to the story already. This is waaaay to normal. Readers pick up a book to be taken on a journey or adventure of some type. There is nothing here so far that suggests that.

Helping Seeya walk with his walking stick.
“I’ll look after you”, she says, when they go for walks.

Playing doctors and patients with Achi. Achi is a real doctor, so doesn’t have to pretend much. Except when Anika is bandaging her.

One of Anika’s most favourite things to do at Achi and Seeya’s house, is listen to Seeya’s stories.

Stories of funny things. Surprising things. Exciting things. Stories of when Seeya was young.

Seeya tells Anika he learnt to swim in a lake on his family’s property in Sri Lanka. With a four foot water monitor, he thought was a crocodile.

“Was it?” asks Anika, jumping up and down.

“No,” Seeya replies, “Just a long lizard. But thinking it was a crocodile, made me swim faster.”

Seeya tells Anika when he was a teenager, he liked a girl. When he saw her at a village fair, he ran to her, said “Good night” and then ran away. He was so embarrassed he didn’t speak to the girl again.

Anika puts her head in her hands. “You are a nutmeg Seeya!”

Seeya tells Anika he went to University in England. To become an engineer, and travel the world. They look together at all the places he visited on a map.

“I’ve never been to so many places in my whole life”, says Anika. Spain where he ran with the Bulls in Pamplona.
“You can’t run Seeya”, Anika says looking at him suspiciously.
“I could then,” Seeya says. “Fast!”.

Italy where he met Enzo Ferrari, who showed him around his racing car factory, and where he saw the Olympics.

“I was in Kinder Olympics”, Anika says proudly. “You won a medal”, Seeya agrees.

What are the “Kinder Olympics?”

Germany where Seeya was as an exchange student, and saw the Oberammergau Passion Play.

What is the “Oberammergau Passion Play?”

“You saw people play in Orby-bow?” asks Anika screwing up her nose. “Almost,” says Seeya.

Russia where Seeya stepped behind the iron curtain. ??? What does this mean? 

“That’s so silly Seeya. Curtains aren’t made of iron,” Anika shakes her head. One day when he finished his stories, Anika sat deep in thought.

“You’ve had lots of adventures,” Anika asks. “Will I?” Well, she’s four… right? This doesn’t really sound like a question a four year old would ask?

“Of course!” says Seeya.
“How do you know?” asks Anika.
“Because you’re my grand-daughter!” Seeya says, smiling.
“I am!” Anika agrees, as she picks up some sand for her lasagna.

OK… I’m not sure about this. This seems more like an outline to a story than an actual story itself. I don’t want to sound harsh, it’s just that I see a lot of manuscripts like this. Too many people think it’s easy to write a kid’s book. It’s not that easy to keep a reading audience engaged either. Even and especially kids.

To do that you need to first have structure to the story… such as:

Introduction–> Rising Action–> Climax–> Falling Action–> Resolution

This outline is the basic outline ALL GOOD STORIES FOLLOW. From popular TV shows to movies to best-selling novels… they ALL start with that basic outline and work out from there. That is missing in this story. What is also missing are a lot of details. We don’t know what anyone looks like… (No pics don’t fill in the blanks or tell the story).

We don’t know what their surroundings look like and we don’t have an agenda/challenge for the lead character to over come. That’s the heart of any story is watching the protagonist get into trouble and how they get back out of it. That’s the transformation of a character or character arc that is so satisfying to a reader… yes even preschoolers. They may not be able to articulate it but they can tell when something isn’t right in a story.

Since there is no climax to the story we don’t really know what the story is about. It’s a nice little story that has no story arc to it. It’s not the kind of book that gets readers excited. You’ve done a nice job of keeping the sentences short and the language fairly simple for a young audience of 4-5.

I would suggest choosing some type of challenge for Anika or Seeya to overcome (It’s a little unclear who the main protagonist is in this story).

It doesn’t have to be huge… just something difficult she has to push herself to accomplish/overcome.

Perhaps her grandfather can help her to keep that interaction going as that is a very nice relationship they have.

Try to start the very first sentence of any book or even chapter with characters in the middle of action of some sort. Action helps to define a character.

Here is a good link for writing dialogue. Yours dialogue is pretty good though:

http://www.writersdigest.com/editor-blogs/there-are-no-rules/keep-it-simple-keys-to- realistic-dialogue-part-i

I’ve also included a few “cheat sheets” to help you make this story stronger.

Thank you. Please contact me with any questions.