January 7, 2023 ‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for CLARITY. <–…
June 20, 2022 ‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding…
