‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity

‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity

This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for

‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example

‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example

This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a