Mr. Snuffles – Children’s Book Developmental Editing Example

Mr. Snuffles – Children’s Book Developmental Editing Example

BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT. 

EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.

My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…

‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Children’s Story Developmental Editing Example

‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Children’s Story Developmental Editing Example

***  I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments