*** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…
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Hello and thank you for ordering my children’s book editing service! I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. OK… let’s get started… Always include a…
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I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches a lesson that: adventure in action,…
Bedtime Battle: by Allison Myers This is a funny bedtime story for kids about two brothers, who don’t like taking a bath and prepare to bedtime. This is considered a picture books or preschool books which is suitable for Ages 3-6. It could be considered a baby book, a kids book and a bedtime story….
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This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for CLARITY. <– one of the biggest issues writers face. Thank you for ordering my manuscript critique service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments…
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