Here is a Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help Hi, as part of my editorial review I will offer grammatical, punctuation and spelling corrections, as well as, give my opinions throughout your work. My comments will always be in dark pink. The body is the most impressive and mysterious machine ever…
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Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that my corrections and comments will always be in dark pink. Additionally, please view this editing example along side the original as there be many deletions which obviously can’t show up in…
Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s take a look at…
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This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding of how to tell a story. I eventually stopped working with new writers. Most public schools teach people how to read and write well. They don’t tell students how to tell…
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This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers in this capacity. Writing for kids is not nearly as easy as many adults might think. There have been no changes except a name here or there to protect the writers…
BELOW IS AN EXAMPLE OF A DEVELOPMENTAL EDIT OF A CHILDREN’S BOOK MANUSCRIPT.
EXCEPT FOR IDENTIFYING INFORMATION I HAVE LEFT IT AS IS.
My comments are always in dark pink. I make corrections and give my impressions as I go along…
OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that and always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Honey Bee Rescue Ashley, Maria, Marcus, Jose, and Alexander…
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*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches…
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Thank you for ordering my editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…
Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby
