August 25, 2022 A Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help – Editing Critique Here is a Story on Nutrition & Healing – Part Memoir/Part Self Help Hi, as part of my editorial review I will offer grammatical,…
August 25, 2022 ‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that…
June 27, 2022 Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a…
June 20, 2022 ‘Afternoons With Seeya’ – Developmental Editing Critique Example This is another developmental editing critique on a short children’s story. As you will soon see, the writer did not have a clear understanding…
June 16, 2022 ‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers…
