Editing Service Example – ‘Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World’

Editing Service Example – ‘Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World’

Thank you for ordering my editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…

Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby