‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Editing Example

 I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches a lesson that: adventure in action,…

Read more

‘ELLIE AND BEN’ – A Rhyme and Meter Editing Example

  *** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…

Read more