OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that and always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Honey Bee Rescue Ashley, Maria, Marcus, Jose, and Alexander…
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Thank you for ordering my editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…
Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby
*** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…
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Sneak Peek Critiques© is all about the FIRST 8 SENTENCES of any book or story. Most editors and literary agents know within the first 8 lines whether or not they want to keep reading a manuscript.
As a writer and editor myself, I have found this to be true. So, today we take a look at Stephen King’s Finders Keepers.
Hello and thank you for ordering my children’s book editing service! I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. OK… let’s get started… Always include a…
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