50 shades of grey

Sneak Peek Critique© Of Fifty Shades Of Grey By E.L. James {VIDEO}

Sneak Peek Critiques© are all about The first 8 LINES of any book and today we’re taking a sneak peek at 50 Shades of Grey.


Most editors & literary agents know if they want to keep reading a manuscript within those first 8 sentences.

I had noticed this tendency as well, while editing many of my writing clients manuscripts.

It becomes apparent very quickly whether a writer understands their craft or not when reading their work. 


So, let’s get to it! E.L. James’ 2011 erotic thriller has much to live up to.

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Wishing you much imagination…

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Want another Sneak Peek Critique©?

Try this one on Chapter 1 of  ‘Invisible’ by James Patterson’s


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