Everyone lives with fear to some extent or another. Even if it’s the kind of fear that only comes up as a warning to keep you safe. That is Not This. In this short segment we address low levels of fear that are present almost always. Many times it is illogical and irrational to have…
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Writers work alone. Often with no one to give them a truly honest opinion of their stories. Remember that old cliche? – If you want to become a better writer… just write. I filled binders to bulging with writings that went nowhere. Until I finally learned THIS…
An American Poet – Emily Dickinson There’s something about Emily Dickinson’s story as a woman and a writer that really hits deeply when people discover more about this enigmatic lady. Let me introduce you to a deeper understanding of Emily Dickinson; She was born in 1830 She lived to be 56 years old She…
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*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches…
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Tarot card and palm readings, meditation workshops, intuition building seminars etc. It can all be helpful. Yet, it can all be misleading. It can all be flat out WRONG too.
*** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the…
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I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in the editing. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Big Foot Little Feet This adventure story teaches a lesson that: adventure in action,…
This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for CLARITY. <– one of the biggest issues writers face. Thank you for ordering my manuscript critique service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments…
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