‘Adelina’s Wings’ – Editing Example

Hello; I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would so, my comments will reflect that. Take note that my corrections and comments will always be in dark pink. Additionally, please view this editing example along side the original as there be many deletions which obviously can’t show up in…

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Spike’s Planet – Editing Example Of Metered Rhyming Verse For Kids

Spike’s Planet In Search of the Greatest Treat Thank you for ordering my developmental editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s take a look at…

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‘Crocs Crust’ – Developmental Editing Example

This is a (real) editing example of one of my developmental edits for a client. It’s a children’s story. I’ve helped many new writers in this capacity. Writing for kids is not nearly as easy as many adults might think. There have been no changes except a name here or there to protect the writers…

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‘Honey Bee Rescue’ – Editing Example of a Children’s Story

OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that and always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Honey Bee Rescue   Ashley, Maria, Marcus, Jose, and Alexander…

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