‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Editing Example
I like to go through a writers work as any first time writer would. My comments and critiques will reflect that in
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‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity
This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for
“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book
Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a
‘Honey Bee Rescue’ – Editing Example of a Children’s Story
OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader
‘Big Foot Little Feet’ – Children’s Story Developmental Editing Example
*** I like to go through a writers work as any first time reader would for this developmental editing service.. My comments
Editing Service Example – ‘Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World’
Thank you for ordering my editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…
Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby
‘ELLIE AND BEN’ – A Rhyme and Meter Editing Example
*** A REAL LIFE RHYME AND METER EDITING EXAMPLE WITH A CLIENT’S WORK Thank you for ordering my manuscript editing service.
Bedtime Battle – A Bedtime Story By Allison Myers – A Children’s Book Review
Bedtime Battle: by Allison Myers This is a funny bedtime story for kids about two brothers, who don’t like taking a bath and