“Mini Me” – Book Editing Example of a Childrens Book

Hi; Thank you for ordering my editing service. My comments are in pink. I always go through a client’s work as a first time reader would and make note of anything that may or may not be an issue for the reader. I will make positive comments on things that work well and comments on…

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‘Honey Bee Rescue’ – Editing Example of a Children’s Story

OK… thank you for ordering my editing example service. I like to go through a writer’s work as any first time reader would. My comments and critiques will reflect that and always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started… Honey Bee Rescue   Ashley, Maria, Marcus, Jose, and Alexander…

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