‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity

This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for
This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for
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Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby
Graham Wallas, (born May 31, 1858, Sunderland, Eng.—died Aug. 10, 1932, London), was an English scholar. Wallas was also the
Like many of you reading this, I have explored the psychic and spiritual worlds in many ways. Tarot card and palm