‘Animal Cracker Circus’ – Editing Example – Making Changes For Clarity
This is another manuscript critique/edit I did for a children’s book. Take note of where I suggested the author make changes for
Tag: art of writing
Editing Service Example – ‘Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World’
Thank you for ordering my editing service. I will give you my impressions as a first time reader, as well as, offer comments for improvement and/or clarification. My words will always be in pink. Please note any deletions against the original. Let’s get started…
Harley the Hummingbird’s Wonderful World
Written by Roget Bibby
English Scholar Graham Wallas Wrote ‘The Art of Thought” & Proposed One of The First Models of The Creative Process
Graham Wallas, (born May 31, 1858, Sunderland, Eng.—died Aug. 10, 1932, London), was an English scholar. Wallas was also the